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- Dear
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- The speech that you submitted to me for presentation at
- John Franklin's retirement party is excellent with one
- minor exception.
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- Inasmuch as John is somewhat sensitive about his age, I
- feel that it would be inappropriate to make any reference
- to this fact. I would appreciate it if you would delete
- those sections in Paragraphs 6 and 7 which specifically
- comment about his age and/or employ the words "golden
- years", and find a suitable substitution.
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- Once again, the speech is very well written. Thank you.
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